Self-deprecation is worth its weight in smoldering phoenix-ashes and baby unicorn tears.
or; a story in poetry.
Published on March 29, 2008 By SanChonino In Poetry

Thanks first to Kelly for resurrecting the JUWC.  I'm so sick of what passes as political and religious 'debate' on this site that I'd much prefer writing and reading such as this.

In the OP, I posted a haiku as a joke, saying that was my submission, but then I was bitten by the haiku bug, and today I was finally able to sit down and finish my haiku story.  it's nothing special, but it doesn't suck as bad as I feared it would.

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Two paths, two roads, dark,
filled with scent of foreboding,
rotten apples, fear.

 

Which to choose? Neither?
This tattered corner home holds
mysteries, puzzles.

 

Old man sits on porch,
smiling wickedly, sickly,
teeth rotting, stinking.

 

Should I ask him which?
His years, his memories are
etched across his face.

 

Mouth opens, closes,
fish-like, dumb. I can't speak words;
apprehension rules.

 

The man reads my thoughts.
'Not many come this way, now,
not since the old days.

 

'I've taken both roads -
I've followed each to its end.
It doesn't matter.'

 

'Wait, what do you mean?'
My brow furrows, confused, lost.
'The paths are equal?

 

'Far from it, my boy,
one is filled with life, light, air,
cherry blossoms, love.

 

'The other? Darkness.
Pain. Blood. Suffocation. Tears.
Nothing but remorse.'

 

'No, how can that be?
You said the paths were equal,
I don't understand.'

 

His eyes, rimmed with blood,
black pools of deep nothingness,
meet mine, capture them.

 

'Never said equal,
boy, don't put words in my mouth.
Said “didn't matter”.'

 

'Wait – one sounds dreadful,
the other filled with beauty,
why won't it matter?'

 

His voice cracks, trembles,
'Boy, they end the same – release.
Shuffling off this coil.'

 

My eyes close, thinking.
When opened, the man is gone.
It doesn't matter?

 

One has beauty, life.
The other – sickness, darkness.
Both ending in death.

 

I sit in the chair,
Unable to decide one,
blanketed in cold.

 

Two paths, two roads, dark,
filled with scent of foreboding,
indecision, fear.


Comments (Page 2)
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on Mar 31, 2008
She probably understands what it really means.


Yup. So I can't figger out why English teachers love it so much. Ugh. and it's the only Frost I know, so...track record for me...I guess I don't like Frost either.
on Mar 31, 2008

She probably understands what it really means.

Opportunity cost...to put it in economic terms.  What you could be doing but can't because you're doing something else.  And one may look back with remorse to wonder which way was really better...and with a sigh go on to skew his story to make it seem that he was adventurous and chose the road less travelled.  However, they were equal if you're readin' closely.   Luck and chance...free will and fate.  You don't really have a clue as to what you're doing when you make a choice sometimes...and that...can be terrifying.

Woo, interpretations!

~Zoo

on Apr 01, 2008

I like how you not only told a story with haikus but how each haiku can stand on it's own.

Very cool, SC.

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