Everyone's Here.

or; song in B minor

Published on January 31, 2007 By SanChonino In Writing

Everyone's here.
Everyone's waiting.
Everyone's longing to get a bite, get a bite.
I stand in fear,
Full of my loathing.
Everyone's aching to get a bite, get a bite . . .

I feel their fetid claws;
They tear, they rip, they scrape;
Eviscerating me -
I'm trapped without escape.

Everyone's here,
Picking and pulling.
Everyone's dying to take a bite, take a bite.
I cry in pain,
Pleading for darkness.
Everyone's begging to take a bite, take a bite . . .

I feel their fetid claws;
They tear, they rip, they scrape;
Eviscerating me -
I'm trapped without escape.

Everyone's here,
Eating me slowly.

© 2007 Braeden Jones

Comments

Zoologist03

on Jan 31, 2007

Hmm...very nice...disturbing, but still nice.

Now I'm hungry for some strange reason.

~Zoo

SanChonino

on Jan 31, 2007

Now I'm hungry for some strange reason.

It's possible this stemmed from the "eating myself" post the other day . . .

dynamaso

on Jan 31, 2007

It's possible this stemmed from the "eating myself" post the other day . . .

I was wondering about your cannabilistic inclinations of late. Still, I liked this piece. Have you got any music for it yet?

DrDonald

on Jan 31, 2007

I don't have to be faster than the cannibal chasing us. I only have to be faster than you, sir. Thanks for the poem.

BlueDev

on Feb 01, 2007

Weird, wild and whacky.

foreverserenity

on Feb 04, 2007

Did you see King Kong on HBO tonight or what?! Reminded me of all those critters trying to eat each other and all the people in sight! Ewwww!

Interesting, kind of understand, I think....let's see...too many people wanting too much from you, asking too much....and you not feeling you're up to the full potential...? Or something like that...or I'm wrong!LOL!

A for Effort anyway!

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