Hmm...I like it.

~Zoo

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something about sun, love and gondolas?

The line is actually "I can see the sparrows, the dew, and the sun" . . . close though!

Thanks both for at least taking a look. I don't expect a lot of response to this baby, because most of the people here won't understand . . .

I got a bit of it...I'm not exactly a Spanish expert...but I know some...4 years of high school Spanish, I'd better remember something.

~Zoo

Don't speak the language either. I'm going to have to take lessons soon enough though. Glad there's an expert 'on my doorstep'!

4 years of high school Spanish, I'd better remember something.

You'd better remember a bit, man . . .

Glad there's an expert 'on my doorstep'!

You know it, Donna! Think of me like a free tutor!

ok, so I copied your text into a translator, and it completely fouled up the poetry, but still I could sense this was a poem of longing, and even through the lousy translation, there was something good in there!

Moskowitz,
The embarrassed Mexican Jew who can't speak espanol worth mierda

so I copied your text into a translator, and it completely fouled up the poetry, but still I could sense this was a poem of longing, and even through the lousy translation, there was something good in there!

I'm gonna translate it . . . that way you can get a decent translation . . . thanks at any rate, B!

mierda

Well, at least you have the important words down, eh? LOL

~Zoo