Self-deprecation is worth its weight in smoldering phoenix-ashes and baby unicorn tears.
or; Poem in E-sharp minor, if you must . . .
Published on August 23, 2006 By SanChonino In Poetry
I look across the verdant field
The sky, completely overcast
It seems to mirror perfectly
The way I used to feel

Tumultuous, twisted painfully
The thoughts of just what could have been
The memory of your lovely face
Is all I've left that's real

The lightning comes, it strikes the ground
And throws its sparks across the field
The grass, once green, now coppers from
The licking, burning flames

I stand there in a ring of fire
And let the flames course up my calves
I'm past the point of feeling; I'm
Consumed within my thoughts

The skin begins to crack and peel
I feel the pain, at last, begin
To rouse me from my lifeless world
And take me out again . . .

I'm finally breaking out of the cycle I've been in
Pity that the only thing to break me out is my pain

Comments
on Aug 24, 2006
Howdy San Chonino, I like visuals...good work.
on Aug 24, 2006
Thanks, man. Glad you enjoyed it.
on Aug 24, 2006
This reminded me of Trent Reznor's "Hurt". A nice piece of writing. Keep it up.
on Aug 24, 2006
This reminded me of Trent Reznor's "Hurt". A nice piece of writing. Keep it up.


Wow, high praise. That is one of my favorite songs that he's done. Thanks, Buddah.
on Aug 24, 2006
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on Aug 24, 2006
nice...
on Aug 25, 2006
Yep, real nice...
on Aug 25, 2006
Jennifer, Shovel, Maso, thanks a bunch to all of you!